优秀英语作文:一封信
一封信 The letter
Dear brother,
I’m in Guizhou now.I have many friends here. They are all kind to me.I often have breakfast with them.I like Guizhou food very much.They are nice.I am very glad to be here.
Yours,
Yang Jing
亲爱的兄弟,
我现在在贵州,我在这里有很多朋友。他们对我都很好,我经常和他们一起吃早餐,我非常喜欢贵州菜,他们很好,我很高兴能在这里。
你的,
杨晶
考研英语作文万能模板之请求信
Dear___________,
I am writing to formally request to___________(请求的内容)
The reason for ______________is that______________________________(给出原因).I________, so I ___________________________________(给出细节)
I would also like to request ________________________(提出进一步的要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.
Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at____________(电话号码). I look forward to a favorable reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
写信 Letter
作文题目
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。
注意:1.词数:100左右:
2.参考词汇:房租—Tent(n.)
范文一:
Dear Bob,
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
亲爱的鲍,
我很高兴收到你的来信,我很高兴听到你会去中国学习中文。我已经找到了你的菲亚特。在芳草街,不远处就是我们中文学校。你可以坐11路车,前一站就是中文学校。公寓第三层有3间,其中一间是卧室,另一间是浴室和厨房。这里有一张床,一张沙发,一张桌子和几把椅子,在这25平方米的小公寓里,租金是每月500元。也许这辆菲亚特不是你的愿望,但我会尽我最大的努力来满足你的需求。如果不够,写信给我,我会找另一个更好的地方。
希望你不久就来这儿!
所有最好的!
你的
李华
满分理由:本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
范文二:
Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.
Best wishes !
Yours,
Li Hua
亲爱的鲍,
欢迎来到中国!你写信给我找个地方给你。
我已经找到了一套公寓附近的芳草街荐新学校。它在第三层,里面有三个房间:一间卧室,一间厨房和一间浴室。卧室里有一张床,一张沙发,一张桌子和一把椅子。房子面积25平方米,每月租金500元。
也从这所房子你可以很容易地到你的学校。就在楼前的汽车站乘11路公共汽车。它只是一站。最后,请你告诉我你到达的时间吗?然后我就可以去机场接你,看到你。
最美好的祝愿!
你的
李华
范文三:
满分理由:本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清楚,衔接紧密流畅,时态语态使用准确,特别是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不同的亮点。
Dear Bob,
How are you these days?
I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
亲爱的鲍,
这些天你怎么了?
我很高兴知道你会来我们的城市学习中文。你让我找个地方给你。现在我发现了一个我认为很不错的。这个地方是在芳草街11号附近的巴士站。它只是一个停止远离建中文学校。
有三间房间,一间厨房,一间浴室和一间卧室。虽然不是很大,只有25平方米,我觉得很适合。按方式,每月租金为500元。我希望你会喜欢它。如果没有,我会试着找另一个地方给你。
你的,
李华
满分理由:本文内在逻辑性很强,由远及近。由外及内,层次分明,错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,很出彩,再则结构完整,从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。
范文四:
Dear Bob,
I’m so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here. I’ve already found you a house near our school. I’d like to tell you something about it.
You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square metres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month.
Hope you’ll enjoy staying here!
Yours,
Li Hua
亲爱的鲍,
我很高兴你要来学中文。我已经找到你在我们学校附近的一所房子。我想告诉你一些关于它的事。
你可能会得到关于No.ll巴士曹芳街,下一站就是建新中文学校。这房子离学校很近。大约25平方米。在卧室里有一张床,一张靠窗的沙发和一张靠窗的桌子。你可以在桌子上找到一个灯,在它旁边有一把椅子。有另外两个房间连接的卧室。左边的'是一间浴室,右边的是厨房。所以你可以自己做饭。这房子的租金是每月500元。
希望你会喜欢呆在这里!
你的,
李华
满分理由:本文内容具体,详略得当,表述方式很有创造力和新意,长短句并用,语言结构富于变化,错落有致,顺畅圆润,尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到,为文章增色不少。
范文五:
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you.
The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.
It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.
Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
亲爱的鲍,
我很高兴收到你的来信。
欢迎到我们的城市在九月。我找到了一个适合你的房子。
房子在芳草街,从建中文学校不远。如果你乘11路公共汽车,它只是一个停止。
这是一栋第三层的公寓楼。它有三个房间,一个客厅,一个浴室和一个厨房。你可以自己做饭。镜子、盆和浴缸对你很方便。客厅里有一张床、一张沙发和一张椅子。桌子在窗户旁边。这将是很好的学习。总面积为25平方米,每月租金500元。
你会满意这个单位,或者你想要另一个吗?只是让我知道。我会尽我所能帮助你。
你的,
李华
满分理由:本文内容详实,描述具体细腻,用词适当准确,如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等,另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。
中考英语满分作文:给校长的一封信 A Letter to the University President
Direction: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A letter to the university president about the canteen service on campus, you should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
假设你是李伟,请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写了一封信,内容涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等等,可以是表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼而有之。
满分作文:
January 11th
Dear Mr. President,
As a regular student at our college, I have some complaint to make about the canteen service on campus.
Frstly, the canteen environment is very bad. Actually, it is becoming more and more crowded and noisy with an ever larger presence of vocational students every term. Secondly, the canteen workers are bad-mannered. Far from being warm and kind-hearted, they always seem to be cold and rude to us students. Thirdly and most importantly, the dishes at our canteen are too expensive, though they are by no means good quality or delicious. The survey the Student Union carried out last week reveals that on average a student will spend 10 to 12 yuan on meals every day. This is for more than the food expenses of students in the neighborhood colleges.
Nutritious and delicious meals well within the students‘ means are very important for young students. I really wish measures could be taken to improve our canteen service.
亲爱的总统先生,作为一个普通学生在大学,我有一些投诉作出关于校园食堂的服务。首先,餐厅的环境很糟糕。事实上,它正变得越来越拥挤和嘈杂的一个更大的存在对高职高专学生每学期。其次,食堂工人不礼貌。没有温暖和善良,他们似乎总是很冷,对我们无礼的学生。再次,最重要的是,我们食堂的菜太贵了,但他们绝不是优质美味。调查学生会上周进行显示,平均一个学生会花10到12元每天的饭菜。这是比在附近高校的学生伙食费。营养美味在学生吃饭的青年学生是非常重要的。我真的希望可以采取措施改善我们的食堂服务。
A letter for parents一封给我父母的信
Dec.6th
Dear dad and mum,
I have been very happy in the school. Sometimes, at night I cry in the bed because I miss you very much. You always say “Learn well and I will be happy.” So I work hard in the school every day. After class I play with my classmates. We skip rope, play cards and ball and so on. I spend a lot of time doing my homework. When I finish, I play Pingpong with my friends. Then I spend some time reading my English notes. At six o’clock I have my evening class. Then I have my evening snack at twenty past seven. After that, I have some free time. At eight o’clock, I go to bed. This is a day in the school. Mum, you always tell me “Happiness is very important in our life.” So I want to be happy every day. If you are not happy, call me please.
Yours,
Laura
亲爱的爸爸妈妈,
我在学校非常开心,有时候,晚上躺在床上我会忍不住掉眼泪因为我非常想念你们。你总是说“好好学习,我们会很高兴。”所以我在学校每天都很努力。下课后我和同学一起玩,跳绳,打牌和打球等。我花了一段时间做家庭作业,之后我和朋友一起打乒乓球。然后,我花一些时间阅读英语笔记。六点钟上夜课,七点二十分钟吃宵夜。在那之后,我有一些空闲时间。八点钟,我就上床睡觉了。妈妈这就是我在学校的一天,你总是告诉我:“生活中最重要的是快乐。”所以,我要天天快乐。如果你不快乐,给我打电话吧。
此致,
劳拉
高考英语作文预测:邀请函
邀请函
假定你是李华,你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年,即将回国。现在由你给她发E-mail,邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会,要点如下:
(1)祝贺她顺利通过考试,她的学习进步很大,为她骄傲;
(2)感谢她帮助你们学习英语;
(3)时间:星期六晚六点;
(4)地点:阳光俱乐部(The Sun Club)302房间;
(5)路线:在你所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达。
注意:
(1)须包括以上主要内容,可以适当增加细节,使内容连贯;
(2)词数:100左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)参考词汇:欢送会 farewell party
Dear Jane,Congratulations on your passing all the exams.
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【猜题理由】该素材围绕与学生的日常生活相关的话题,体现"生活化"的特点。本篇写作要求写一篇邀请函,能够充分体现生活实际和语言的交际功能。
【构思点拨】写邀请函时一方面需要说明邀请理由,另 一方面要把活动的时间、地点、乘车路线等细节问题一定要交代清楚。
【参考范文】
Dear Jane,
Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. All you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English We'll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.
It's pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00 p.m.? We'll have dinner together. By the way,you may take Bus No. 332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua